Quote: "Your name is Vincent Clarke. After a vicious prison sentence for 15 years due to murders (which were aimed at gangsters, mind you), you arrive home with a police "escort". "
You need more of a reason for the murders. What did the gangsters do to him? You don't just kill someone because they are "gangsters", let alone several of them.
Quote: "They search your apartment and find an arsenal of machine guns and bombs in a large closet. They take these weapons, and put you under 24-hour house arrest."
You do realize if any kind of weaponry is found in a house, especially bombs, ballistics specialists are called to deactivate them, and everyone has to be evacuated out of the building? They'd take you to a cell at least, not keep you in a house where weaponry has been stashed.
Quote: "At midnight, a man knocks at your door. He is from Caliber, an army of freedom fighters. He says that the SWAT and military should be defeated due to them thinking that Caliber is a terrorist group. "
If he starts attacking the SWAT and military, won't he be a terrorist?
Quote: "The first mission? Seize a local arms factory; Factory #26.A."
Arm's factory? I didn't realize many places had them locally.
#26.A? Sounds cool, but if its 'A', how many more arms factories do you need?
Too many holes for my liking.
Paul